I believe we should definitely have two cross countrys every year so we can get more house points for our team.
Firstly: I believe we should have more sport because people might like sport the sport that people might like could be netball, rugby and more.
Secondly: I believe we should also have fun with sports because when you're playing netball and you get a goal you feel proud of yourself having fun sports helps us feel good about ourselves.
Thirdly: I believe we should have two cross countrys a year because you can get faster with more practise.
Therefore: In my opinion we should have more sports for children because if they've just started playing sport it would be great for them to know how to play them better.
By Emma
Well done Emma. You put a lot of thought into creating your written persuasive argument. Some really good ideas.
ReplyDeleteDo you think you could have added any more persuasive language to convine your audience even more about having sports at school?